 GeneHilbert
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Date: April 25, 2006 @ 4:10 PM
Kewl bass lick, timing is a little off.... watch that. Mix is also off the bass is way too hot in the mix. Back it off about -6db or more. Kewl lead line, nice, catchy and melodic. People remember melodies. If you can whistle or hum your melodic line - chances are some people will. The drum machine line gets boring after awhile, cue changes, accent what the bass and lead are doing, change it up a little.
Kewl Tune – Good Job
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 leedsquietman
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Date: April 25, 2006 @ 10:00 PM
It has a great melody. Of course what it really needs is a vocal or get someone to collab who can write lyrics sing. It is very reminiscent of Joy Division and early New Order (same band as Joy Division except Joy Division's singer commited suicide and the guitarist took over vocasl and then they went all synthy within a year or two)
Agree there's a small issue with timing, esp. on the lead part - is that a soundcard latency thing, it might be this as much as being naturally off beat. If your soundcard/DAW support direct monitoring you might want to try this (any insert effects won't be heard until playback but stops those small latency delays)
The bass is very sweet on this tune.
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kingo
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Date: April 26, 2006 @ 8:13 PM
Very cool track man. Definitely a strong, hooky feel. Gene's right about the drums, they get a little boring. This could use something like a tamborine or a shaker or something to liven up parts of it, probably the choruses. Definitely crying out for some vocals.
Well constructed song.
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 ShadowMom
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Date: April 27, 2006 @ 7:53 AM
I enjoyed this one, just sat back and let it go. It's going on my playlist, that's for sure.  
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 zique
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Date: April 27, 2006 @ 9:39 AM
Sounds good.Dig the groove,flow and tempo.Very melodic.I thought it was arranged very well...I listened to both versions and I think they are both good.May sound strange but I like the raw feel and edge of this one.Good job putting this together.
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GeneHilbert
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Date: April 27, 2006 @ 11:13 AM
Mix is better......
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Lemieux1
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Date: April 30, 2006 @ 8:50 PM
Hey it sound very nice, Cool vibe. It remind me a bit of collective soul. Keep up your great job.
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